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Nights of passion
Remain in my mind
Why I’ve remembered
Can’t be defined

I loved you more
Than words could tell
I was somehow blinded
By your touch’s powerful spell

Just the feel of you skin
Or the taste of you lips
Lord what you could do
With just your fingertips

Our love was fire
So easy to ignite
The speed at which I fell
Had my heart in a fright

Sadly the passion
Set something else ablaze
And the new smoke of envy
Created a shadowy haze

It’s green fog like water
Extinguishing my lustful dream
And the jealousy broke it down
Until it was nothing but ash and steam
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When you're in a relationship with a lot of lust and passion Envy tends to take a big role and well sometimes it gets in the way. Especially when you're young!

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:wow: I really like this... I love how you kept the pattern afloat and it rhymed all the way through while always making sense. Considered this fav'd! :+favlove:

Great work! :highfive: Keep writing! :dance:

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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
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thanks! :hug: :highfive:

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