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Swimming for love

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In an ocean of solitude my heart is mournful. I feel utterly alone as I float in the waves so far out I lose sight of land. To me at this exact moment the water is as desolate and barren as a desert, The waves are like sand. Only instead of parching me of thirst the water is over quenching.  The waves are softer out here but it’s starting to get harder to stay afloat because I’m so tired… As the weariness hits me I begin to struggle to stay above the surface.. As I start to sink beneath the surf visions engulf me… I see my life flash before my eyes just the way they say it does before you have your last real moment of life. In these visions I see the many people that have gone in and out of my life like the ebb and flow of the tide. As my feet touch the pebbly bottom I see a glimpse of his face, Warm eyes touching my soul and a smile that warms me to the core. The memory fills me and flows over me like a hot spring in middle of the mountains. Suddenly all is not lost and I push myself back to the surface, ready to battle the undertow and make my way back to shore… All because of love. All because of him.
This is my first written deviation in a while.. i;ve been having a great deal of writers block when it comes to poetry so i decided to try a little bit of Prose.. My earlier poetry,"Middle of the Ocean" and "The Salvation Seekers Dive" inspired this piece.. This piece was also inspired by "Into the Ocean" By the Band Blue October

In a way this poem is ironic to how i feel at the moment. Me and my boyfriend broke up so love is not going to be what heals me. At least not for the moment, anyway. But the point of me writing this was to show how you can feel like you are at rock bottom but then you push towards your dreams and life doesn't seem so hard anymore.
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Guitarhero1975's avatar
What a beautiful piece of literature you have here, I enjoyed reading it as I felt it's warmth so overwhelming and delightful :) :+fav: :star: